Needs to be longer...
Narwhals are hands down the greatest form of life on planet earth.
And I need more of them.
Needs to be longer...
Narwhals are hands down the greatest form of life on planet earth.
And I need more of them.
I feel dirty.
Wow, my inner-child may be confused and crying a little bit, but I thoroughly enjoyed that. Look forward to seeing more corrupt disney characters and childhood memories!
I'm sorry, but...
I feel like I just watched like a dozen cliched animes all at once, as told by an angsty 16-year-old. But don't take that the wrong way, we all had those moments in our lives.
Now, to the video. You show promise as an animator, you're getting basic actions and movement down. I do like your camera use, the way you laid out scenes. The only thing that got me was the story, and the music... and the story again.
I mean... the two brothers fighting to death in the desert with katanas, one's been brainwashed and the other has to release him from his chains even if it means killing him (by the way, if the only thing that can stop you is death, than everything can stop you [mortality]).
You seem like you have the ability to write intriguing stories, you just need to develop that. Get out there and read as many books as possible (try and mix it up a bit, sci-fi, classic literature, old epics, etc, etc.) because hopefully each one shows you a new angle on storytelling. Which will help you develop.
And, though you seem like you do this already, keep working on drawing. Carry around a sketchbook with you, draw whatever comes to mind. EXPERIMENT, it'll help you find that style that these basic faceless characters need so badly.
And finally, I'm sorry to be mean, but... your taste in music sucks... I don't know where to begin. Just... go on a torrent site and download a bunch of different cds and try them out. Maybe some Punk? Classic Rock? Indie? Grunge? I dunno... but something. Just remember: no matter what your parents tell you Nickelback sucks (Cold, also).
Keep at it!
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Washington, DC
Joined on 1/15/09